Cummings experimented with form, punctuation, spelling and syntax, leaving behind traditional methods of writing and structures to create a new mean of poetic expression.
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there are so many tictoc clocks everywhere telling people what toctic time it is for tictic instance five toc minutes toc past six tic Spring is not regulated and does not get out of order nor do its hands a little jerking move over numbers slowly we do not wind it up it has no weights springs wheels inside of its slender self no indeed dear nothing of the kind. (So,when kiss Spring comes we'll kiss each kiss other on kiss the kiss lips because tic clocks toc don't make a toctic difference to kisskiss you and to kiss me) | ||
Reaction:
I did not fully understand the poem because of the words such as "tic" and "toc" and the stanza with the word "kiss" thrown in a bunch of times. After a second read, i realized that those words were just thrown in between the words. For example, the last stanza should be read as:
"(So,when Spring comes we'll kiss each other on the lips because clocks don't make a difference to you and to me)" |
I think the poem means that time does not matter when you are with the one you love. |
Technique:
Cummings used a series of breaks and put in unneeded words into the stanzas to make a reader have to read it a second time to fully understand the poem's meaning.